Where does the writer stray from the topic What could be done to fix this problem Explain what you would cut and cross it out in the text of the essay.?

To address the issue of the writer straying from the topic, they can maintain a clear thesis statement and ensure each paragraph directly relates to it. To fix this problem, the writer should delete any sentences or paragraphs that do not directly support the main argument. During the editing process, I would look for tangents or discussions that do not contribute to the central idea and cross them out to maintain focus.