An example of setting a scene telling a story as a hook?

As the sun dipped below the horizon, painting the sky in hues of orange and purple, the old, creaking porch swayed gently in the evening breeze. A faint smell of jasmine lingered in the air, mingling with the distant sound of laughter from the nearby fair. In the corner of the yard, a forgotten swing swayed softly, as if beckoning the memories of childhood adventures. With the world around her fading into twilight, Sarah clutched the faded letter in her hand, ready to uncover the secrets it held.