What are the examples of sense poem?

I have to wite a five senses poem(the poet explores his/her emotions as they relate to:sight, smell, taste, sound,and feelings)

This is my Poem:

Love is blind

It sounds like the thunder before the storm

It feels like the earth after the first rain

It smells like red roses

It tastes like saccharine strawberries

It lives everywhere

Can you please tell me if it makes sense? and edit it for me please, and say what can i add to it(i think the ending has to change)

ROSE >.<