Does this sentence make sense A wretched tribulation of torment?

That is not a sentence, it has no verb. 'A wretched tribulation of torment' is a noun phrase that can be used in a sentence as the subject, the object of the verb, or the object of a preposition; for example:

subject: A wretched tribulation of torment blew in with the monsoon.

object of the verb: He suffered a wretched tribulation of torment.

object of the preposition: They saved the village from a wretched tribulation of torment.